Your raw GED Score is determined by giving you 1 point for each correct answer and 0 points for each incorrect answer.Your raw score is then “equated” to derive a scaled score. CK-12 Foundation - Sat Prep - https://behssatprep.wikispaces.com/PWN the SAT - Not affiliated with or endorsed by the American Council on Education (“ACE”) or GED Testing Service LLC.You say that it starts in childhood and that the behavior continues to adulthood, and then you tell how you think children get into bad behaviors.
One thing that’s good is that you use an example from your life. But it needs to be better connected to your main idea.
Could burning your hand have become bad adult behavior? to pay attention to children to stop them from developing bad behavior that will follow them into adulthood.
You can talk about how that behavior starts, grows, and becomes bad adult behavior…
a child sees a parent drinking, wants to try alcohol, and then when they’re an adult they become an alcoholic.
how those behaviors then become bad adult behavior when the child grows up.
I’d like to see the middle paragraph talk about a couple of specific examples of bad behavior children might have, where they come from, and how they become bad adult behaviors.For example, if your percentile rank were 74, it would imply that 74% of the graduating seniors who took the test score at or below your score.Your GED test score is determined by first calculating your raw score, and then determining a scaled score.), and then explain more about what kind of adult behavior kids are imitating, how caring adults might stop them, and how the bad childhood behavior later becomes bad adult behavior (alcoholism, cigarette addiction). If I were you, I’d focus on having good organization, good details, and writing in clear, simple sentences.You do have some language mistakes that make it a little hard to follow. like “harmful” instead of “harm” in the question at the beginning. You’ve got good word choice, if you keep your grammar simple.The GED (General Educational Development) Tests are a set of five subject tests designed to certify that a student has the academic skills normally acquired by completing a typical high school program of study.The GED Tests are always given in person at one of 3,400 testing locations nationwide. I'm sharing my evaluation because it's so helpful to see a sample of what to look for.Whenever I look at an essay, I look at the same things the GED (and TASC and Hi SET! I think you did a pretty good job staying focused on the question of why people continue to do things, even though they know they’re harmful or bad.This standardization process sets the benchmark that candidates must achieve to earn a GED credential.Currently, students pass the tests by achieving a GED score higher than the top 60 percent of graduating high school seniors.