Paragraph 3: During my first semester, I have come to realize the influence a community has on my learning and growth.
At Central State, the campus is active from around eleven in the morning until three in the afternoon, Monday through Friday.
In high school, discussions and opinions on almost any subject were spontaneous and interesting.
At Central State, the small class size and the seminar formats have presented a great setting in which to learn.
The highly motivated professors, who encourage participation, have been the highlight of my experience thus far.
However, the level of student interaction has not been gratifying.
One Saturday in October, while walking to the dining hall, I realized that I was one of five people on campus.
With the majority of undergraduates living in on-campus dorms, the campus of Northern State fosters a unique intimacy. Such activity creates a comfortable environment that promotes interaction and the formation of strong bonds between members of the community.
Avoid sounding overly negative about your current school because you don’t want to badmouth any school.
Despite its positive aspects, this paragraph lacks concrete details.